Alice
Slayer
- Joined
- Nov 3, 2005
- Posts
- 7,558
- Location
- Germany
- Society
- Rising Potentials
- Avatar Name
- Alice in Wonderland
I finally had some time a major update and rephrasing of my guide
since i first wrote it i added and updated several things, but this time i read it completely again, rephrased a lot and tried to make it sound more english, as my english improved quite a bit (imo at least) since i first wrote it as well
i also found several outdated and even wrong info (especially about skill effect, but a lot more was based on assumptions back then), which i tried to replace with facts i am pretty sure they are correct or deleted the rubbish
i am currently in a phase where i have it read for typos and grammar errors by a native english speaker (likely by several more once hes finished)
either way, i would like to have a feedback on:
if i should anything in it which may be interesting or missing
if something is totally wrong; especially since i don't craft/tailor, just had my hair made 2 times so far i think, so beauty isnt my area either and may have written rubbish about the stuff i don't perform myself, which i hope is correct
or if you have other remarks
additionaly, i would like to mention again that the server i used to save it on was saved, it is now http://rp.apachenet.de/downloads/planet_calypso_guide.pdf so please use that one instead in case you still use the old adress
also, in case you use alice-pe.tk, which has caused problems in the past, consider changing to rp.apachenet.de
another thing which was proposed to me in the past was to add some kind of donation system to the site, which i won't do
first of all, because i don't want to work me through the problems of that
second, because i don't think it had been much use as newbies don't have cash either way and its for them
third, because i don't want have it look like i just wrote it to get some extra cash, since the main reason was to save me some typing to disciples, when i could provide some info via the guide
back to the feedback about the guide, i especially want to know if i managed to write the eco and armor section understandable, as it is a bit complex with all the figured
so, if you have any feedback, let me know
have fun
since i first wrote it i added and updated several things, but this time i read it completely again, rephrased a lot and tried to make it sound more english, as my english improved quite a bit (imo at least) since i first wrote it as well
i also found several outdated and even wrong info (especially about skill effect, but a lot more was based on assumptions back then), which i tried to replace with facts i am pretty sure they are correct or deleted the rubbish
i am currently in a phase where i have it read for typos and grammar errors by a native english speaker (likely by several more once hes finished)
either way, i would like to have a feedback on:
if i should anything in it which may be interesting or missing
if something is totally wrong; especially since i don't craft/tailor, just had my hair made 2 times so far i think, so beauty isnt my area either and may have written rubbish about the stuff i don't perform myself, which i hope is correct
or if you have other remarks
additionaly, i would like to mention again that the server i used to save it on was saved, it is now http://rp.apachenet.de/downloads/planet_calypso_guide.pdf so please use that one instead in case you still use the old adress
also, in case you use alice-pe.tk, which has caused problems in the past, consider changing to rp.apachenet.de
another thing which was proposed to me in the past was to add some kind of donation system to the site, which i won't do
first of all, because i don't want to work me through the problems of that
second, because i don't think it had been much use as newbies don't have cash either way and its for them
third, because i don't want have it look like i just wrote it to get some extra cash, since the main reason was to save me some typing to disciples, when i could provide some info via the guide
back to the feedback about the guide, i especially want to know if i managed to write the eco and armor section understandable, as it is a bit complex with all the figured
so, if you have any feedback, let me know
have fun
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