Nice indeed! I do feel the following in bold needs working on, however:
"Explore Arkadia for free as long as you like. When you wish to take part in economic activities, add funds to your avatar account by working or depositing.
Work: Earn money by performing paid jobs or by collecting resources for other colonists. Money earned is automatically credited to your avatar’s PED card.
Deposit: Deposit money via credit card and other options to your avatar’s PED card. You can withdraw from your avatar account to your bank account any time you want."
If we start being asked more ingame what the jobs are, that wouldn't surprise me. But I don't know what answers to give!!! I guess sweating is the 'collecting resources for other players', but jobs? I can only think of fapping, and that is neither organised much nor suitable for starting out.
Teaming with a solo instance participant to enable access is something I know about too at a very small scale, but I can't see that being enough of an answer either.
So, Ark devs - what is the paid work you have planned for people already entering the game from your ads?
Also, the withdrawal element: 'any time you want' is something I don't feel to be true when following forum posts over several years. Will we be able to expect a faster and smoother process now? Note: it is my impression, not my experience, as I have not tried to make withdrawals. But I'm flagging it up as it is a clear statement on the starter page... I realise it is an MA thing, more than just Ark, but it is your ad!
Edit: oh shhhh... just noticed it says 'Money earned is automatically credited to your avatar’s PED card'. I hope this is not a reference to that out-of-game do surveys etc site!!!! I was thinking the ad was talking of in-game activity, but the only automatic payments in-game are now the fapper percentages of looting in teams, and that is not to ped card, but stuff to inventory.... please don't go down that external road!