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Before starting with the story, I wanted to say thanks to all of the ppl who participated in the screenies. They didn’t know the story. Especially I want to thank the MA guides, who gave their permission to take screenies of them.
In any case, the people had no real idea what the story was about, nor what they would speak in the story (before someone is annoying the ppl, or especially the guides! that stuff was my idea!).
I hope you enjoy it.

Bruce is a Feffiod Warrior and one of the actors in this story.
https://www.planetcalypsoforum.com/forums/showthread.php?t=41200

But what brought a peaceful Feffoid to work as security guy for the CDM (Calypso Dance Mafia)?

Well, let’s go back in time, when Hadesheim just was built and hired, since not many humans were available, some Feffiods to help in their Power Plant.

Bruce father Norman, a terribly bad trader, accepted the job offer gratefully.
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Some day during his break, he saw a beauty (well, for him at was at least): the Maffoid girl Mary, who was searching for fruits.
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Mary fell in love with Norman immediately.
And as the things tend to go, Bruce was born soon after

(here should have been a "dirty" pic, but I decided not to post it)

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Feffiods grow up very fast and teenager Bruce was searching (or rather stalking girls) to find a girlfriend.

But he put his goal a bit too high, since his eyes fell on the 4 town beauties and they were out of his range.

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But as soon he got a car, this lack of interest changed.
Although, the girl was a bit weird, she insisted to go around naked (not that Bruce ever complained about this) and always carried a flashlight with her.
It is also questionable how Bruce fit into the car?!

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The luck didn’t last long, and it came as it had to; a guy with a better car showed up and the girl left him

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Bruce was disappointed, and joined a gang, the Mohjos, led by a person just known as
“The Mohster” (this cowboy pimp in the picture).

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The Mohjos were the most violent and aggressive gang Hadesheim has ever seen, robbing bars and shops mainly

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And soon Bruce became the guy in charge of “convincing” people to pay the “safety fee”. Especially the clothing shops were the target of Bruce.

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After months of being terrorized the clothes sellers left calypso, a real sale was impossible.
Ander after losing most of their shipments, the bar suppliers stopped all deliveries, just telling the poor bar owners there will be a next shipment soon.
Since the Mohjos are gone, there is hope that the shipments will indeed arrive in the future, but first the suppliers have to see it is calmer nowadays.

But with more and more blackmailing and robbing, the Mohjos gang came more and more in the view of the police.
But, the Mohjos were experienced in hiding.


Therefore police hired an observing and infiltrating specialist, “Eagle Eye” Johnson.
Johnson observed Hadesheim day and night, using his secret weapon, the trained Hiryou
Pupu.
(actually, Pupu was more intelligent than his partner, who was mainly specialized in shooting and deserved the “eagle eye” title more, but as long he got some nutrios, Pupu didn’t care)

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After some days of flying high above the roofs of Hadesheim, Pupu finally managed to find the gangs headquarters.

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Johnson informed the police immediately, and they sent their special squad.

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All of the Mohjos were arrested (with some casualties), except Bruce. (According to rumours, the Mohster managed to escape too)

Exactly at that day Bruce visited a friend in Hospital

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But, why am I there too?
Well, Bruce’ friend had a little accident. While going out with my little pet Daikiba, called Hope, she suddenly ran away.

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I was terribly sorry, and visited the poor girl in hospital, and met Bruce there also.

But, let’s go back to Bruce.
After visiting his friend that day, Bruce went back, and found his gang arrested.
He was lost again and made a mistake. Bruce robbed a Feffoid trader.

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The clans sent him into exile.

Without his gang, friends, and even the support of the Feffiod Clans, Bruce was desperate, but remembered me.
After a little conversation, I hired him as security guy.

Thinking back now, he stole the Atrox egg most likely to be accepted by the clans again.
Wonder of our paths will cross again.


THE END :D

Actors
The Mohster : moh
Agent Johnson : Hank
Bruce’ friend : Arti
Alice as herself

Groups
(Appearance in the screenies, from left to right)

The beach beauties: Yumi, Reyes, Mikah, Edana
The Mohjos : Josh, Outman, moh, Edana, Eric, Falco
The Police : The guides Emma, Simon, David, Paul, Zoe


Guest stars
Several Feffiods as Bruce, Norman and the Feffoid Trader
Maffoid Guard as Teresa
Umbra Female Adept as Bruce’ GFs
Molisk Leader as “the guy with the better car”
Hiryou Young as Pupu
 
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oki, as i thought, i didn't need the space ^^

well then, hope you enjoyed the story :)

hf

maybe i should need ot for something else :D

I'm sorry for some pictures, first, i can't draw, and second, the last pictures were too big (i took them with a higher resolution, and had to make them a bit smaller)
so, sry for this
 
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what a story, much better then i ever expected! +rep! alice has done it again :D
 
great story master ;)
love it

^^
 
I am inspired. A beautiful story.
:yay:


And the people all over the world applause:


Ich bin begeistert. Eine sehr schöne Geschichte.
Je suis inspiré. Une histoire très belle.​
Ik word geïnspireerd. Een zeer mooi verhaal.
Εμπνέομαι. Μια πολύ όμορφη ιστορία.​
Eu sou inspirado. Uma história muito bonita.
Me inspiran. Una historia muy hermosa.​
私は促される。非常に美しい物語。
Я воодушевлян. Очень красивейший рассказ.​
나는 고무시킨다. 아주 아름다운 이야기.
Sono ispirato. Una storia molto bella.​


Thanks Alice
:)


(+rep will follow if i am able to give again...)
 
HAHAHAHA! Alice..I really enjoyed that and can't wait to read more 'Bruce' :)

Funnily enough this is exactly how I imagined Bruce's origins when he was introduced in your last story ;)

Obtuse humour rocks! ;)
 
Well done Alice. Always enjoyable reading one of your stories.

Nice to see all the RP ppl involved too.

Keep up the good work, and say Hi to Bruce next time you see him. :)

+Rep
 
Absolutly Lovely :)
Finally definetly paid off, selling sweat for 4.4 :rofl:

The Guides all toguether pic looks really nice, congrats Alice, now ofc, waiting for the third part ;) .. what happened to Bruce's kid?? :laugh:
 
wonderfull story..
hope to see more stories soon as it`s the best way to keep me busy at my work :)
 
Mikah said:
The Guides all toguether pic looks really nice, congrats Alice, now ofc, waiting for the third part .. what happened to Bruce's kid?? :laugh:
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good idea mikah ;)
i wanna know what happened to bruces kid :baby: :tongue3:

hurry up alice ^^
 
seems you liked it :D

Mikah said:
Absolutly Lovely
Finally definetly paid off, selling sweat for 4.4 :rofl:

The Guides all toguether pic looks really nice, congrats Alice, now ofc, waiting for the third part .. what happened to Bruce's kid??
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Edana said:
good idea mikah
i wanna know what happened to bruces kid

hurry up alice ^^
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didn't even know he has one ?

actually, the kid in the story is bruce

he hasn't got a kid yet :rolleyes:

I'm happy that i got enough plot for this story, i doubt there will be another one soon


sidenote, how many stories do i have to write to get the "story teller" button below my name ? :silly2:
 
Alice said:
didn't even know he has one ?

actually, the kid in the story is bruce

he hasn't got a kid yet
I'm happy that i got enough plot for this story, i doubt there will be another one soon
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ok then first marry him and later the baby arrives :p

^^
 
Edana said:
ok then first marry him and later the baby arrives :p

^^
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:eek:

that doesn't go that fast

i would first have to describe the escape of bruce to the clans :rolleyes:

i might write another story if that one is appreciated ;)
 
Lol that was fun :) The most intriguing part is that I really didn't know what the whole story is about (I just did what Alice asked me to do), but it came out perfect! Well done, Alice!
 
Arti said:
Lol that was fun :) The most intriguing part is that I really didn't know what the whole story is about (I just did what Alice asked me to do), but it came out perfect! Well done, Alice!
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:D
it wouldn't be nice of you had known the story, this way its more a surprise :)

glad you liked it
 
I just discovered these 2 stories - really great Alice. Gave me a lot of amusement when I should be working. :)

I would like to see part 3 as well. (and 4,5,6...)

Although I can't decide whether Bruce is a good guy or a bad guy. He seems a bit unlucky, and maybe he fell in with a bad group, but to find he's responsible for the lack of clothing shops in Hadesheim. :(

He definitely needs a good feffoid to keep him on the straight and narrow. :laugh: Maybe then we'll see the baby Bruce which Mikah wants.:)
 
KP708 said:
I just discovered these 2 stories - really great Alice. Gave me a lot of amusement when I should be working. :)

I would like to see part 3 as well. (and 4,5,6...)

Although I can't decide whether Bruce is a good guy or a bad guy. He seems a bit unlucky, and maybe he fell in with a bad group, but to find he's responsible for the lack of clothing shops in Hadesheim. :(

He definitely needs a good feffoid to keep him on the straight and narrow. :laugh: Maybe then we'll see the baby Bruce which Mikah wants.:)
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TY :)

story 3 was more meant to be about the egg actually ;)
 
hmmm
another hint XD
 
Alice said:
TY :)

story 3 was more meant to be about the egg actually ;)
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no no no not the egg.:silly2:

well ok then can i put in a request for story 4....we want more about Bruce, not the egg. We don't know anything about the egg here. We've never seen the egg. In fact we don't believe the egg really exists. We think maybe it's just a virtual egg, not real at all.

So after you've finished hatching your plot to produce story 3, shelled out loads of peds on crack reporters (sorry bad yolk...I mean joke), please please please can you do another one about the life of Bruce.

I kind of like him as a hero - I want to see him win through, overcoming his troubled past, not be cast into a life of obscurity as another nameless maffoid :)

Edit: damn Bruce is a feffoid not a maffoid. Hang on feffs are male and maffs are female? Is that the right way round?
 
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i will see

might as well match in story3, since i have 4 "storylines", or rather parties (if i get my cast together that is)

anyway, it will take pretty much time i guess

will be a rather big story, kinda many screenies to edit etc.
trying to find enough time to continue writing ^^

edit, bruce is male :)
 
Great story again Alice :)

Although, i must admit some disappointment at the omission of the 'dirty pic'...
 
Leandro Kun said:
Great story again Alice :)

Although, i must admit some disappointment at the omission of the 'dirty pic'...
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story 3 will have one too ^^

well, it will be censored :p
(already planned before)

again, if i get the cast, but in that case it will have some humour, promise ;)
 
We all are curious what is going on with Bruce or the egg.

For all, who need some pastimes while Alice is writing the next part(s), you can have a look at these pictures of part 2 again...
Alice said:
Bruce was disappointed, and joined a gang, the Mohjos, led by a person just known as
“The Mohster” (this cowboy pimp in the picture).

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The Mohjos were the most violent and aggressive gang Hadesheim has ever seen, robbing bars and shops mainly

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... and then ask yourself: What happened to the members of the mohjos?

I dont know it for every member, surely, but one is working as a mentor for the indigenous people...
;)

come on Alice...
:D
 
bump

wheres story 3 master?????
youre taking too long ;)

^^
 
hmm...
WHAT??
a couple of months??
T.T
think about us waiting "patiently"
XD
you said the story has 3~4 parts right?!
then post the 1st part and later the 2nd then ....
pleeeease *puppy eyes*

^^
 
Edana said:
hmm...
WHAT??
a couple of months??
T.T
think about us waiting "patiently"
XD
you said the story has 3~4 parts right?!
then post the 1st part and later the 2nd then ....
pleeeease *puppy eyes*

^^
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i can't

maybe i have to adjust some stuff so i dont have too many problems later on :D

so i can post them in parts, but just after its finished :)
 
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